okay, but cool
I liked your post Harrison & Henry. Well done
very good bravo from kyran and alfie t
Well Done but make sure it makes sense and check the spellings
I really liked your story. Well done it is very dramatic. If i had to rate it out of 5 i would rate it 5 well done again
How lucky. Great story
Rember your capital letters at the first word
when writing I as in yourslef make sure it is a capital letter.
From Kye De Friend
You just had to use Jeff and Jeffery
Try to use your 5 sences so you give a bit more Info
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okay, but cool
I liked your post Harrison & Henry. Well done
very good bravo from kyran and alfie t
Well Done but make sure it makes sense and check the spellings
I really liked your story. Well done it is very dramatic. If i had to rate it out of 5 i would rate it 5 well done again
How lucky. Great story
Rember your capital letters at the first word
when writing I as in yourslef make sure it is a capital letter.
From Kye De Friend
From Kye De Friend
You just had to use Jeff and Jeffery
Try to use your 5 sences so you give a bit more Info
From Kye De Friend