A big shock!

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8 Responses to A big shock!

  1. gracie and rebecca from 5h says:

    This piece of writing really made me and Rebecca laugh. It’s really funny. But there is a spelling mistake but apart from that it is a really good piece of writing.

  2. conne says:

    well done but check your spellings

  3. mcgeg says:

    that 100wc was amazing well done girls

  4. aldei says:

    typical brothers LOL brill story

  5. huntc says:

    I actually laughed when it mentioned the hair dyed 🙂

  6. chanc says:

    Great idea for the story and you managed to go under 100 words. Impressive:)

  7. seveh says:

    Thanks for all the nice reply’s. We found a part in our blog where we had missed out punctuation, but we didn’t
    find a spelling mistake. 🙂

  8. forad says:

    good story but what dose the word tddj

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