best work ever
relly good
Nice cliff-hanger! Good work and description! 🙂
Fantastic story love the use of your adjectives .Also great cliff hanger at the end. Isla and Megan H 5CC
THAT WAS SO AWESOME! 🙂
WOW!!!!! I love your work so much and you made sure that you put all your punctuation in and the bit I love most was that you used 3 dots at the end which really made us want to read on.
Lily-Rose and Katy
Amazing work keep up the good work. Great use of adjectives. Keep blogging-
Well done
Hello im on a differant acc but i wrote this story and thanks for the amazing comments
love Ella Connelly
Thanks guys for the awesome remarks. This is probably the best work I’ve ever done! 🙂
great work very harry potter, like keep up the great work
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best work ever
relly good
Nice cliff-hanger! Good work and description! 🙂
Fantastic story love the use of your adjectives .Also great cliff hanger at the end.
Isla and Megan H
5CC
THAT WAS SO AWESOME! 🙂
WOW!!!!!
I love your work so much and you made sure that you put all your punctuation in and the bit I love most was that you used 3 dots at the end which really made us want to read on.
Lily-Rose and Katy
Amazing work keep up the good work. Great use of adjectives. Keep blogging-
Well done
Hello im on a differant acc but i wrote this story and thanks for the amazing comments
love Ella Connelly
Thanks guys for the awesome remarks. This is probably the best work I’ve ever done! 🙂
great work very harry potter, like keep up the great work