nice peice of work great tense at the end
love it really cool 🙂
Really good story and good adjectives. we really thought your ending was amazing! Isla and Megan H 5cc
BRILLIANT STORY AND GREAT SENTENCE OPENERS IT WAS AMAZING WELL DONE!
Very good story! I liked the fact he was a vampire.i liked the story line because it had vampiers and i love vampires
I LOVED the dramatic ending It made me jump out of my shoes and that was the best bit. -Laurence I loved how you did the Onamatapia BITE!!!! It was really good.- Dylan Pundu
That was a very interesting story I want to know what happens to Jennifer next !!
thanks hoped you liked it
nice cool story
i really like your story. well done. i like your adjectives and openers
thank you guys so much for the support from george/mcgeg
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nice peice of work great tense at the end
love it really cool 🙂
Really good story and good adjectives. we really thought your ending was amazing!
Isla and Megan H
5cc
BRILLIANT STORY AND GREAT SENTENCE OPENERS IT WAS AMAZING WELL DONE!
Very good story! I liked the fact he was a vampire.i liked the story line because it had vampiers and i love vampires
I LOVED the dramatic ending It made me jump out of my shoes and that was the best bit. -Laurence
I loved how you did the Onamatapia BITE!!!! It was really good.- Dylan Pundu
That was a very interesting story I want to know what happens to Jennifer next !!
thanks hoped you liked it
nice cool story
i really like your story. well done. i like your adjectives and openers
thank you guys so much for the support from george/mcgeg