Really creative but you could check your spellings and try and make sure it makes sense though amazing so keep up.
I love your post! Next time you could check your spelling and punctuation. I loved that you used similes.
thank you very much 🙂 ps ok
Good story but next time check your spellings and capital letters and space bars 😉 James and Max 🙂
Good story but next time check your spellings and capital letters and space bars 😉 James and Max 🙂 awesome
like the idea could be better if you did better punctuation an a bit didn’t make sence 🙁
We enjoyed reading your blog. It was fantastic! 🙂 There was a few spelling mistakes and missed out punctuation. Other then that it was great!
I really liked your post! I cant wait to see what happens next! I love Harry Potter by the way
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Really creative but you could check your spellings and try and make sure it makes sense though amazing so keep up.
I love your post! Next time you could check your spelling and punctuation. I loved that you used similes.
thank you very much 🙂 ps ok
Good story but next time check your spellings and capital letters and space bars 😉 James and Max 🙂
Good story but next time check your spellings and capital letters and space bars 😉 James and Max 🙂 awesome
like the idea could be better if you did better punctuation an a bit didn’t make sence 🙁
We enjoyed reading your blog.
It was fantastic! 🙂
There was a few spelling mistakes and missed out punctuation.
Other then that it was great!
I really liked your post! I cant wait to see what happens next! I love Harry Potter by the way