brilliant story! but I think that you could’ve had a different range of punctuation 😉
😉 well done! from James and Max
I liked the part where he jumped outside the window:D
Very good work left me on the edge of my chair when it said he started a fire 🙂
Well done that is a really good blog plz make others as well 🙂
Well done for making a piece of text that flows very nicely you could improve by using more description and change the cigarette to anothe object otherwise well done
Liked the part when he jumped out the window. Well done guys!:)
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brilliant story! but I think that you could’ve had a different range of punctuation 😉
😉 well done! from James and Max
I liked the part where he jumped outside the window:D
Very good work left me on the edge of my chair when it said he started a fire 🙂
Well done that is a really good blog plz make others as well 🙂
Well done for making a piece of text that flows very nicely you could improve by using more description and change the
cigarette to anothe object otherwise well done
Liked the part when he jumped out the window. Well done guys!:)