100 word challenge

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2 Responses to 100 word challenge

  1. rocka says:

    Lovely post but you can use a different range of openers!!

  2. seveh says:

    Good job on your story!
    I think you could of been more adventurous with your vocab and maybe a few more words.
    Other than that it was great! 🙂
    Tiana and Hannah

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