colchester zoo fun

Posted on February 11, 2016 by Deleted User
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8 Responses to colchester zoo fun

  1. rocka says:
    February 25, 2016 at 2:44 pm

    This was a brill post amazing effort but one wish, make it more exciting!!

  2. winne says:
    February 25, 2016 at 2:52 pm

    Nice work, really like it and very good range of words 🙂

  3. longj says:
    February 25, 2016 at 2:59 pm

    Very good so far. But dose bananating mean bannana eating? I really liked your vocabulary!!;-)

  4. mayhh says:
    February 25, 2016 at 3:00 pm

    very good but there was a spelling mistake also very low variety of punctuation

  5. bangy says:
    February 25, 2016 at 3:04 pm

    I like your idea, keep up the good work 🙂

  6. hubbm says:
    February 25, 2016 at 3:06 pm

    THERE WAS A SILLY SPELLING MISTAKE AND NEXT TIME DO A 100 WORDS

  7. bessj says:
    February 25, 2016 at 3:08 pm

    good work guys:-)

  8. willa says:
    February 25, 2016 at 6:19 pm

    Good job guys! just one spelling mistake though.:)

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